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it does sound like a fruit basket

that horn thing is very groovy. groove goes missing at :16 until :28. the section doesn't need to change entirely, but something is missing. cool break into 1:04. the drop at 1:25 hits light for the buildup i was given, but again, it could be ameliorated without a big rework. the 2:15 moment was well done, but there is a loss of energy that i think could be held on better if you kept those stabs at 2:07 un-lowpass-filtered and loud while the rest tapers down. the drum sample at 2:18 sounds fantastic but i was expecting it to introduce the new groove and keep jamming. in general, it seems a song built with a lot of transitional elements that hint at more impactful drops than i am given.

Iosun responds:

the “lot of transitional elements” was sort of on purpose, my vision creating this was to make something that intentionally felt a bit disconnected and aimless, but I get what you’re saying. this is likely to be edited a bit later on, maybe to sell the impacts more (i’m still learning how to properly be loud). thanks for in depth review!

remember to normalize your tracks. you've created an enjoyable, soft song but listeners are going to have to turn their volume knobs too much.

fordnide

;) i used to make music under the name Fryq shortly after my first newgrounds account

it's fun. remember to normalize your tracks! newgrounds will not balance audio automatically.

the varied choice of sampled and synthesized percussion is nice. i think you have the sounds and/or the compression turned up too loud to really feel the bounce of the groove. it needs to be carved out to make the volume bounce.

i digg it. the drums can be turned up a little, or possibly extra space made for them, and i think it could be advantageous to experiment with boosting the high ends on various instruments. i think there is space for a bass to really punch through with each kick or at the start of each phrase. as of now, i can't hear much on my systems.

TheBreadM4n responds:

That's just how it is :^

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